Mock Essay Peer Review:

 

Name of the personís essay:___________________________________

 

  1. Copy the attention getter from the introduction.  Could it be improved?  How?

 

 

  1. Copy the thesis statement from the introduction:

 

 

 

  1. Summarize the main idea in the first body paragraph (1-2 sentences).

 

 

  1. Does the writer have support for the idea in paragraph one?  Yes   /  No  Who does the writer quote?

 

  

  1. Summarize the main idea in the second body paragraph.

 

 

  1. Does the write have support for the idea in body paragraph two?  Yes   /  No  Who does the writer quote?

 

  

 

  1. Summarize the idea in body paragraph three.

 

  

  1. Does the writer have support for the idea in body paragraph three?  Yes / No  Who does the writer quote?

 

 

  1. Do all three body paragraphs support the main idea stated in the thesis?  If not, tell the writer where your confusion lies.

 

 

  1. What is one strength in this paper?

  

  1. What is one area the writer could improve upon?

 

 

 Your name: ______________________________________________________

 

 

Name of person youíre grading: _____________________________________________

 

 

 

What grade would you give this paper?  ________________

 

 

 

What grade will be assigned by Borger? ________________