Peer Review:

 

Name of the personís essay:___________________________________

 

  1. Copy the attention getter from the introduction.  Could it be improved?  How?

 

  1. Copy the thesis statement from the introduction:

  

  1. Copy the descriptive summary from body paragraph one:

 

  1. Does the writer have an opinion for the idea in paragraph one?  Yes   /  No

 

  1. If the writer has an opinion, summarize it here: 

  

  1. Copy the descriptive summary from body paragraph two:

  

  1. Does the write have an opinion for the idea in body paragraph two?  Yes   /  No

 

  1. If the writer has an opinion, summarize it here:

 

  1. What is one strength in this paper?

 

  1. What is one area the writer could improve upon?